Dans le dix-neuvième et le vingtième siècle, l'immigrée de pays comme Poland, Belgium, Portugal, Italy, et Spain arrivent dans un vague parce que le révolution industrialisé. Un autre vague produit après le deuxième guerre monde. Le pays pénurie travail et France étais bien vieux a acceptais l'immigrée. Autour de 1974, France avais un vague de immigrées de pays musulmans. Tandis que auparavant, l'immigrées étais s'attendrais a assimilais dans le culture français, après le vague de musulmans dans 1974, l'immigrées étais seulement s'attendrais intégrais.
In the nineteenth and twentieth century, immigrants from countries like Poland, Belgium, Portugal, Italy, and Spain arrived in a wave caused by the industrial revolution. Another wave occurred after the second world war. The country lacked labor and France was happy to accept immigrants. Around 1974, France had a wave of immigrants from Muslim countries. Whereas previously, immigrants were expected to assimilate into French culture, after the wave of Muslims in 1974, immigrants were only expected to integrate.

Ryan, voici quelques notes:
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-the countries you mentioned all have French versions! Please avoid English
-une** vague (feminine)
-In some of your sentences, you have up to 4 verbs next to each other and all conjugated. Remember in French you only conjugate the very first verb according to the subject of the sentence.
-Look at your verbs and see if they match your subjects.
Ex: You wrote "l'immigrées étais". It should read "Les immigrés étaient"****
-The information is clearly researched. We just need to work on grammar so that your writing is more comprehensive.
-Your English paragraph is not for you to translate your French paragraph. It is rather so that you can expand on the topic.
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